SHORT STORIES:
Freddie Stone, Day 132 | A Phone Call from a Hotel Room
Graveman | Everyone has a Blank | The 8th Annabelle Riley
Tardy | Solitude
| The Blues | Backwards | We Marched On
A Conversation at Nixon's Funeral | New Car | Hungry
The Hard Part | Married to the Grandmother


NON-FICTION
   
 

SOLITUDE by Kris Lorenzen

 
 


Jack lived happily on his modest farm for several years.

But little by little, the farm became a village; the village became a town; the town became a city.
Jack did not care for the city. He sought quiet. He sought peace. And above all, he sought solitude.

The forest offered all of these. Jack moved away, built a new home that was smaller and superior, and lived among the trees. He was happy in the forest.

Many years passed in solitude.

Eventually, a couple settled in the forest near Jack and among his trees.

In autumn, after the soil had taken the leaves, he could see their chimney; if the wind blew right he could smell their cooking; and, if he listened hard, during those brief moments of twilight when the woods became quiet, he could hear their laughter.

They were happy, his neighbors. They had stolen his happiness from him.

In the winter, after dusk, he made little trips to see them, to establish what could be done.

And of course, Jack fell in love with the woman at first sight. His hate focused (as hate will do) and shifted to the man alone. This woman would be his.

On an especially cold day, he crept through the barren foliage towards his neighbors. He smelled the woman’s cooking inside the small cabin and heard the man splitting wood out back. He beat the man to death with a discarded piece of timber, paying close attention to the mouth, nose and throat.

When he entered the cabin, the woman looked up from her boiling cauldron and saw the blood on Jack’s hands and shirt and piece of wood in his hand and she knew what he had done.

He put a finger to his pursed lips, but she had no intention of screaming.

“My husband and I were chased from the city,” she said slowly, stirring her pot. “But you chose to remove yourself from the world. One day you will change your mind.”

He laughed, and she laughed and tossed herself into the boiling pot.

Jack added the piece of bloody wood to the fire beneath the pot. He watched as it flared briefly and returned to his house, alone.

He could not keep the woman out of his mind.

Jack went into the city (it had grown through the years) to steal himself another woman. He found one near the bridge, but when she looked at him the bridge collapsed and she was washed away in the river.

Undiscouraged, Jack ventured into the city’s winding streets, but every woman who laid eyes upon him died a horrible and fantastic death. One stepped to close to a sewer and was snatched by an alligator. Another was carried away by a murder of crows. A meteor hit yet another.

After twenty-seven women had died by the mere sight of him, Jack tried once again to leave the city, but found himself hopelessly lost in its labyrinth. The city continued to grow and twist as he desperately searched for a way out, inadvertently claiming the lives of countless women.

After years of searching, the city and it’s civilization crumbled. Trees and hills and wild green things made themselves known to Jack again.

He found his old forest again, but never the home he had built, nor that of his neighbor-enemy.

He died, alone, during those twilight hours in the woods when no sounds are heard.

 
   
   
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